Duck-Duck-Treasure
It had been years since I had seen my sister. It had been years since I had played ‘Treasure Hunt’ with her. So, her excitement, as we chased the ‘treasure that she had stumbled upon in the old market’ was quite understandable. To be honest, it was endearing – I had missed my little sister a lot, and I hadn’t even realised it all this while.
“Mother used to bring me here when I was a little girl; I had forgotten all about it,” she said as she led me down the narrow pathways. “It’s funny how you forget a lot about the things that used to be your whole world once upon a time – our village, our home, our family. As kids, that was our whole universe. Now that we’ve grown up, we hardly even think about it anymore.”
A strangely familiar smell was present all around us, right from the time that we had entered the narrow alleys of the market. I couldn’t quite place what it reminded me of, but I vaguely remembered it to be about something from our childhood. All around us, there were small shops frying things or baking things or grinding spices to be used in the tiny kitchens. The smoke from the many cooking stoves hung around heavily above us, mixed with the wondrous aromas of the dishes being prepared to cater to the hungry mouths that would come to the market soon.
“I would surely come here often, now that I know about this place – rather, now that I remember this place once more. After all, this place is just a stone’s throw away from where I live. Look, there,” she cried suddenly, grasping my arm. “You can see our balcony from here. You see?”
I nodded, and we shuffled along once more. There were kids playing amidst the tomatoes being sliced and the potatoes being fried. We pushed past them, resisting the urge to stop and join in their games. An old lady kept looking fondly at the children as they chased each other around a pile of shelled pea pods. She reminded me of someone, but I had trouble placing who she looked like.
“Mother used to get all her spices, vegetables and fish from this market,” said my sister as she led me down past the children. “And the ducks for special occasions.” There was a smile on her face, one that had been triggered by the fond memories of duck cuisine at home, only on days that were deemed fit to be called ‘special occasions.’ I had never been that close with our mother – the only person I felt attached to in the family was my little sister. The thing I missed the most about my family was my mother’s cooking. It was the only thing I remembered now, and as the days went by, I forgot to remember that about home as well.
As the evening crept on, we could feel the crowds swelling. Small plastic tables and chairs were set hastily in shops all around us, and people would sit at one of the shops to snack on the many delicacies that surrounded us on all sides. We didn’t stop, however, in spite of the many mouth-watering treats that were being laid out in front of us on the many tables. My sister kept going forward, tugging me along, with the ever-present promise that the ‘treasure’ we were ‘hunting’ for was “just ahead of us.” We passed stalls with fried chicken and prawns, past shops selling spicy noodles, past woks of steaming soup of different varieties, but we stopped to sample none of these. She led me on and on, till we almost reached the end of the market, and a small establishment with fried ducks hanging outside. This is where she stopped and sat down, the smile still firm and strong on her face.
“Why are we here?” I asked her softly, trying to stay out of earshot from the cooks who were working nearby. I didn’t want to sound rude, but I found that I was even more confused now than I had been while walking down to this restaurant.
“You’ll know in a little while. I’ve ordered the duck noodle soup, I think you’ll like it when you have it. Mother used to get me here when I was little, but we never had a chance to stop. It was always too expensive for us, and that’s why she made the ducks for us on special occasions – so that we, too, could taste the expensive taste of this place.”
There wasn’t anything particularly expensive about the setting – it was quite a dingy shop, and it was hard to figure out the true colours of the plastic seats on which we were sitting, so covered with grime they were. But I could understand what my sister meant when she said it. I had lived through the same tough times that my sister had seen.
All the walking had made me hungry, so when the soup finally came out, I couldn’t wait for common courtesies. The moment the bowl was set in front of us, I made a lunge for it, but my sister stopped me before I could taste any.
“Not like this! You’ll ruin the effect,” she said. “Here, take this spoon and taste it. Taste, don’t gulp it down!” I took the loaded spoon from her and sipped the piping hot soup from it. “Don’t swallow it yet. Close your eyes, and let the soup stay in your mouth for a while. Taste it. Really taste it. Feel the butter and the salt and the pepper, the noodles and the tender duck. Taste the spices, feel it sting your tongue. Chew the meat, feel its texture between your teeth. Savour it, and you’ll know why it’s a treasure worth trudging all this way down here. You feel it?”
My eyes were watering, from the heat and the spices and the pepper. But there was something else as well. Something which made it special, and suddenly it all made sense – my sister’s excitement, the reason why she dragged me down the market where she used to come many years ago, the familiar smell of the market, the kids playing along on the street while the old lady looked on affectionately, and the soup – it all reminded me of home. It reminded me of my childhood. It reminded me of our mother.
“It tastes just like the way she used to cook it, doesn’t it?” asked my sister; but I was too choked up to answer her.
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Inspired from Magpie Tales.
That's delightful. I like the way you get your sister to gradually reveal why she took you to that place. Quite moving.
ReplyDeletethis is really well penned...a delight to read...you build up the tension and the pay off feels nice of finding the smells take her back to her childhood and home...
ReplyDeleteThat was an awesome read! Childhood memories with siblings are the most special ones indeed.. and after reading your post, I miss my brother even more :(
ReplyDeletenevertheless, small things in life need to be appreciated and that is how we can truly savor it. :)
An exquisite read with a poignant ending. Excellent take on this Magpie!
ReplyDeleteWhat a heartfelt story. Isn't it true, though, that it's always the small, bland, simple, unadorned parts of our lives that hold the most meaning and emotion? And always, they bring tears to the eyes...
ReplyDeleteSo nice to have you visit me today. Will be dropping by again!!
Rick
excellent,
ReplyDeleteyou have done an outstanding job showing the the culture.
@Brian... That's the effect I had aimed for right at the beginning. Glad to know that it worked :)
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@Jamie... Thanks for the comment. I think I should say here that this is a work of fiction :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed this... hope to see you around.
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@Shatabdi... Childhood is always a special time. How I wish there was a way we could run back to that time... it's the future isn't it? Where are the time machines?? :D
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the comment... hope to see you around.
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@Morning... Thank you :) Glad that you enjoyed it. Hope to see you around here!
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@Rick... Yes, it always seems to be that way. It doesn't take much for us to enjoy life to the fullest... :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked this. Hope to see you around...
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@Nicholas... Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. Magpie Tales are always fun, aren't they...? :)
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Food and home have a very strong link, that's for sure...
ReplyDelete@Trellissimo... They really do, indeed. Maybe that's why, no matter how far you may have travelled, you still miss home food... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment... cheers :)
Very nice story about brother and sister and how the brother was willing to accommodate his sister by trudging through the marketplace. Allowing his sister to lead him in a trip down memory lane in a very real sense. Family. Very nice.
ReplyDelete@TechnoBabe... When I started writing this, it began in a very different way, and an entirely different setting. Thank God it took a turn away from that... you wouldn't have liked it, for sure :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment... see you around here... Cheers...
Like Proust! Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis really reeled me in. Lots of suspense/tension. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWell done, and so much detail. Smell is such an evocative sense - I have a touching treatment of the writing prompt.
ReplyDelete@ManicDDaily... Thank you for the comparison... :)
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@Other Mary... Smell is certainly like that - almost like music in that respect, isn't it? :) Will go through your Magpie soon as well...
ReplyDeleteThanks... cheers :)
@Brandee... Magpie Tales somehow make you want to write like that :P hehe...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment :) See you around... cheers.
A fantastic, nostalgic walk down memory lane. A good piece fiction here. Well done!
ReplyDelete@Jackie... Thanks. I've always found it easier to write fiction, as compared to poetry or haikus... this walk somehow came out best like this :)
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Such a lovely tale, scintillating with remembrance through spices, reminding me of the film 'A Touch of Spice'. Have you seen it?
ReplyDeletenothing tastes like childhood
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderfully evocative. Childhood memories can be very poignant.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Arnab! I'd love to participate, but duty calls at present - work - and we must take a short break. I, too, enjoy short fiction responses, since my poetry has much to be desired ...
ReplyDeleteDear Amab: The flood of emotions created by the multi-sensory experience is perfectly depicted in your short story. Is this a true story? Lovely detail!
ReplyDeleteNice Magpie!
ReplyDeletethis was wonderful!!! I could almost taste the soup..
ReplyDelete@Shers... I've added that film to my 'to watch' list now :) Thanks for the recommendation.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you enjoyed this one... cheers...
@Jabblog... It's almost funny how we remember those memories in such detail, isn't it? :D
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@Isabel... Nothing ever can, either :) Cheers...
ReplyDelete@Tumblewords... Thank you :)
ReplyDelete@Jane... It's not a true story, I prefer writing fictions... it's inspired by some truth, though, but not mine... :)
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@Kay... Makes me happy to know that you could almost taste the soup here :) I hope you enjoyed how it tasted, almost as much as the siblings did...?
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@Jackie... Anytime you want to share your poems or stories, this site's going to be here :)
ReplyDeleteThat was a short story well told!! It kept me engrossed and the beautiful relationship between a brother and sister is so endearing!! I could picture the entire scene so vividly!! Brilliant!! Incidentally my take on the picture prompt ended in a Duck-Noodle Shop or is it duck-Noodle Soup?? :D
ReplyDelete@Nanka... Duck-Noodle Soup, found in a Duck-Noodle Shop :) I hope the compromise works fine with you...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment. I like writing short stories like this, and I keep sharing them out here. Do read through the rest, and let me know what you think of them...
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What a lovely story. I could see the market through your writing...watched the children play...saw all the little stalls they passed on the way to the one, special shop...and felt their tender memory...good job!
ReplyDeleteHello Arnab, this a beautifully written story. Structure, development, what I like to call "timing" are so well done. And the detail is marvelous. You are a gifted writer. A novel in the works? Short stories?
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting my blog. You will always be welcome there.
@Susie... The market looks nice, doesn't it? :) Makes me wish I was a kid running around that place as well...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the comment :) Cheers...
@Kathryn... Thank you... I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Writing it sure was a lot of fun too...
ReplyDeleteI've tried my hand at a novel, but I don't think I have the patience to sit through one yet. For now, short stories it is. You can find a lot of those on the site here...
See you around here, keep writing :)
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I love living vicariously. Thanks for the memory. -J
ReplyDeletenice...i remember this one from magpie...appreciated the revisit...
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet story! I really enjoyed it! Happy Theme Thursday, too!
ReplyDelete@J... It's the best way to live. Sometimes, it seems to be the ONLY way to live :D hehe...
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That was a really nice story. One that you can treasure as a great writing. Now as to the duck picture. I see it often, so it must be highly treasured by those who use it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for playing in this weeks Treasure Theme Thursday. Enjoyed the story.
God bless.