The Green Stone Eye

Apart from his imposing height, strong jaws and the one stone eye, he looked like a very usual man. He blended in well with the crowd, too – so well, in fact, that it was hard for others to notice him unless they were actively looking for him. This was a little strange, in my opinion, considering the fact that he wasn’t trying to hide, or trying to get by unnoticed. He just stood there by the wall, unnoticed by the flurry of activity that surrounded him. The hosts and the guests of the party moved all around the room, fluttering from one end of the room to the other, always accompanied by a joke or an anecdote, while he stood like a lone rock among a large school of fish; stoic, silent, immovable. He took it all in with his eyes, and stood there propped against the wall with a small glass of whiskey sitting comfortably in his hands.

The party was on in full swing, with small groups congregated across the rooms, and there was something common between the both of us. We were both standing alone in the midst of activity, but while I was uncomfortable being in that position, he was confident in his solitude within the crowd. There was a part of me that wanted to be able to go up to him and talk to him, but there was another part of me that was hesitant. Of what, I’m not too sure – maybe that part of me wanted to be as comfortable in my alonedom as he was with his.

And then there was the part of me that was scared of him. You see, it’s not every day that you see an imposing man like him with one eye made of stone, lifeless and unblinking. So, although I knew it to be an irrational fear, I was terrified of approaching him. The more I stayed uncomfortably on my side of the wall, the greater the fear grew. I started wondering how he had lost the one eye, and what adventures that eye had seen before it was taken away from him. I found myself spinning adventure stories, one after the other, in my head. Of course, there was no way for me to know if any of that was true or not, but I still couldn’t stop. I had resigned myself to stand there all through the evening, smiling uncomfortably every time someone caught my eye, and look on jealously to this lonely stranger enjoying being ignored so much. I found myself wishing that I could be like him as well.

He drained the last of his whiskey, and with that done, started moving towards the bar to get another refill. My discomfort on the rise, I realised that he would pass my way while going to the bar. I quickly looked away, avoiding all sorts of eye contact with him – stone or natural. It wasn’t easy, though, as focussing on anything else seemed something of a challenge at the moment. The dancing couple couldn’t hold my attention, the flashing jukebox didn’t seem flashy enough, and all the while I could hear his heavy footsteps getting closer and closer. I wanted to flee, and hoped that my brain would be able to make up an excuse and run away from the party at that very moment.

“Man, lame party, isn’t it?” he said in a low voice the moment he reached. The green stone eye was staring right into me, but from close up, it didn’t seem that terrifying anymore. “I don’t think I’ve ever been this uncomfortable in my life. I don’t even know anyone out here! And from the looks of it, neither do you,” he added with a smile.

It took me a few moments, but then I smiled and shook his hand, and walked over to the bar with him for a refill myself.

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Inspired from Magpie Tales

Comments

  1. Yes I enjoyed this one Arnab. Other people always seem to give a greater air of confidence!

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  2. I know, but I often wonder why... and I'm still looking for an answer to that! :D

    Thanks for the quick comment... see you around...

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  3. funny how often others are feeling just as we...how many opportunities do we miss in our own uncomfortableness...

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  4. This reminded me of an experience with an old neighbor. I used to say he looked like a serial killer. Turns out: he was born with an unfortunate scowl. But he's a really nice guy.

    The writer's imagination makes people more interesting, sometimes, than they are in reality.

    I wonder if that's a good thing, or a bad thing.

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  5. I liked this - if only we saw it more often - how many of us suffer the same feelings

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  6. We often make the mistake thinking that it's only us who's going through it at the moment... I'm not entirely sure why that particular painting brought about this train of thought, though... :D

    Welcome to ScribbleFest! Sign up to join the community... cheers and see you around :)

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  7. I just read a comment from someone about how deceiving first impressions can be. It's somewhat unfortunate that we give so much value to that, isn't it?

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  8. Your comment reminded me of a line from Ernest Cline's poem 'Dance Monkeys Dance', where he talks about the Human race as nothing more than civilised, shaved monkeys, and how they "feel alone. All six billion of them."

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  9. To feel so alone and uncomfortable in such a room full of people... friends or aquaintances, the intensity can be overwhelming.

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  10. An interesting perspective on an introverted man - well-written and well done.

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  11. But then, more often than not, even in your loneliness, you're not really alone :)

    Welcome to ScribbleFest...

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  12. Thank you... I've felt like this on some occasions, and although the painting which inspired this had nothing to do with the topic I wrote about, it was this that came out in the end :)

    Welcome to ScribbleFest. Hope you have a nice time out here...

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  13. Blending into the background can have its advantages!

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  14. Enjoyed this - the intensity had something of Edgar Allen Poe about it, I thought.

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  15. Sometimes, though, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

    Thankfully, not always, though :D

    Cheers... see you around :)

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  16. I had hoped it to be a little more intense. This story needed it...

    Thanks for the comment. Hope to see you around on the site... cheers.

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  17. i love it! nice take on the photo...

    JJRod'z

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  18. Thanks JJRod'z... welcome to ScribbleFest!

    Hope to see you around... sign up to be a part of the community...

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  19. It is difficult to make characters seem real in a limited amount of words, but, you do it so well. I really enjoy your writing style.

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  20. Thank you... I hope to see you around here, and maybe see a few submissions from you as well :)

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