Raining on Ravenheart


Her skin was whiter than white, making her flesh shine through


Her eyes were blue when she was a child; now, she painted them black.

She had seen a lot in life that had hurt her, but that’s not the point of this story.

The point is that it changed her; it quieted here.

At least, to the outside world; while inside, the constant war of words went on.




And she fought and argued with herself; she won some, and she lost some.

But her every victory drew her away from the world; so she drew on herself with ink

And her every defeat helped her build the wall around herself; so she drew on herself with ink again.

Till the white skin shone black, in memory of those victories and the defeats.

And her face was hidden beneath the mask of sorrow

And her eyes, once as blue as the sky, were veiled behind the blackness those eyes had seen.

She left this world behind; she got lost in the private world she built.

She also spoke to the animals and birds; ravens had a special place in her heart.

For they, like her, shone black as well.

She runs away often; she’s run away today as well.

Not too far today, though; just to the lake behind the hills.

She seems to be waiting for something, but it can’t be the sun.

She says she hates the sun; but then, her eyes are shifty when she says it, so I can never know for sure if she’s telling the truth.

I hope she’s waiting for the rain, because the clouds overhead look promising.

But wait; is that a glint of regret in her eyes? Regret that the sun won’t be here?

And now, she hangs her head in sorrow; and shivers in the chilly air.

And from the gusts of wind that blow over her from the flapping wings of her raven.

Does she long for the sun, after all? Does she miss the warmth, and the life, that the sun promises every day?

And then, it rained upon her; and on her special raven.

And a little of the ink was washed away; but only a little…

~
Inspired from Magpie Tales.

Comments

  1. Fascinating read -- the first of the Magpies I am reading to turn the colour of her garb and even eyes in that way. I was seized by her painting her eyes black! The other main turning point in the story for me was when the narrator begins to speak of himself as "I", raising satisfying questions of their relationship and of why she ran -- but not very far -- and whether the narrator is unique in seeing the shiftiness of her eyes.

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  2. At some point of time, I think everyone does :)

    Thanks for the comment... see you around. Cheers...

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  3. Thank you Jo :) I hope to be able to keep writing like this often... in fact, I'm hoping to get another little story finished tonight, if I can make it :P

    Cheers...

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  4. Maybe that's because the narrator has seen her running away at times. Maybe it's because he wishes that she doesn't run away too far... maybe he is the only one who can notice the shiftiness of her eyes, but I know for a fact that it only makes him sad...

    Thanks for the comment. Hope to see you around here! Cheers...

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  5. This was a piece that I immersed myself in, just as the woman in the image immersed herself int he rain. There are some lovely turns of phrase in it and I also liked the blue eyes being painted black. Good Magpie!

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  6. Thank you... It was fun writing this one as well, in a strange way...

    Welcome to ScribbleFest! Hope to see you around, do sign up and join the community...

    Cheers...

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  7. Hi Arnab...this was a wonderful read...
    "Her eyes were blue when she was a child; now, she painted them black." I loved the line...It kinda stuck with me till the end.... :)
    Amazing post!! Keep writing!

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  8. Thanks Pavitra... I remember your blog from a long time ago, it's nice to stumble across places like that quite unexpectedly :)

    I'm glad you liked this one... I couldn't resist writing this one after seeing the prompt at Magpie Tales. It's nice when things like that come along your way, isn't it? :D

    Cheers, and hope to see you around here. Do sign up for the site, and share your work here as well...

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  9. manyof us build walls with words - I like yours

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  10. Arnab i loved this...every life says d story...

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  11. Thanks Preeti. In a way, yeah every life has a similar tale... :)

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  12. Sometimes, though, it's important to come out of the walls as well. Even if it's just to paint graffiti :D Thanks for the comment...

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  13. @Kirit... Thanks. Waiting for your contribution now! :)

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