"If only I had a gun," thought Ali. "Maybe, if I could blast a bullet in my head, it'd help to stop the pounding." He laughed at the absurdity of the thought almost immediately though, as real life took a grip on him again. He had never thought that he could fight with Raman the way he did. He never thought that he was capable of saying the things that he did, to Raman; his best friend since childhood. He wanted to say a lot of things to him; that he hadn't really meant any of the things he had said to Raman when they fought. That he still was his best friend, in spite of everything. Most importantly, he wanted Raman to know that he did not want him to "die and go to hell" as he had told him to. Ali had tried calling Raman quite a few times, but he had had no luck. He was very hopeful thus, when finally the phone rang. He picked up the phone hastily, only to see that it wasn't Raman, but Kalpana who was calling him. "Kay. I thought it was ...
i want the butterfly to come back....smiles.
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing that something so delicate can be so powerful. In life, and in memory's keeping...so fragile and yet it meant everything. Thank you for the reminder that though memories stay behind, they do settle down. It can be overwhelming when they stir like a hornets nest. You wonder if peace will ever come to roost.
ReplyDelete@ Brian... I do too. Thanks...
ReplyDelete@ Wine and words... It's the fragility and it's delicateness that makes it all the more powerful. More often than not, it's us who fail to recognize that.
@ Brian... I do too. Thanks...
ReplyDelete@ Wine and words... It's the fragility and it's delicateness that makes it all the more powerful. More often than not, it's us who fail to recognize that.
What I really like about this is how you flit from the man to the butterfly back to the man, showcasing the impact of this meeting from both points of view.
ReplyDelete@ Joybird... The last time I did something like that, there were a few people who didn't like it. I hope this time it was a little more likeable :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment.
Cheers,
Joy...
@ Joybird... The last time I did something like that, there were a few people who didn't like it. I hope this time it was a little more likeable :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment.
Cheers,
Joy...
masttt..!!!
ReplyDeletei love this... :)
but am bad at commenting so you can always assume I am speechless ;)
masttt..!!!
ReplyDeletei love this... :)
but am bad at commenting so you can always assume I am speechless ;)
@ sakhii... Thanks a lot. Haven't seen you around for quite some time, but I don't think that's got much to do with you to be honest. I know I haven't been around much lately... but I hope to remedy that :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Joy...
@ sakhii... Thanks a lot. Haven't seen you around for quite some time, but I don't think that's got much to do with you to be honest. I know I haven't been around much lately... but I hope to remedy that :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Joy...
:) is all I'm saying/doing.
ReplyDelete@ bondgal... I'm glad to see the smile.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Joy...
@ bondgal... I'm glad to see the smile.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Joy...
almost innocent....like a snapshot....true innocent and pinch of poetry...
ReplyDelete@ buckingfastard... In a good way, I hope. Thanks...
ReplyDeleteAnd you write poetry too! :)
ReplyDeleteThis here is one of the best ones I have read of late. Loved it :)
And you write poetry too! :)
ReplyDeleteThis here is one of the best ones I have read of late. Loved it :)
I oscillate a lot between poetry, prose, and photography. For the last
ReplyDeletefew weeks, the prose bit has been on a bit of a hold...
Thanks a lot for the comment.
I oscillate a lot between poetry, prose, and photography. For the last
ReplyDeletefew weeks, the prose bit has been on a bit of a hold...
Thanks a lot for the comment.