55 Fiction: Good Morning


The morning sun was shining through the draped windows, and he could see her lying next to him. She was beautiful, and the sun bouncing over her made him wish he could stay like that forever, lying next to her.

"Alright, it's time to wake up," he said.

"Woof!" she answered, wagging her tail.

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  1. Brian MillerJune 3, 2010 at 3:35 AM

    ha. a man and his dog...nice 55.

    you linking up to g-man on friday?

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  2. Brian MillerJune 3, 2010 at 3:35 AM

    ha. a man and his dog...nice 55.

    you linking up to g-man on friday?

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  3. järnebrandJune 3, 2010 at 1:01 PM

    Very nice. I can relate to this. Man's best friend, right? (Sometimes woman's best friend too...). :) Well done! /Jo.

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  4. IcE MaiDeNJune 3, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    :) Nice!

    Though as you know me well, I would have liked it more if it was Moonshine he was talking about :)

    Cheers,
    Annie.

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  5. IcE MaiDeNJune 3, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    :) Nice!

    Though as you know me well, I would have liked it more if it was Moonshine he was talking about :)

    Cheers,
    Annie.

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  6. buckingfastardJune 3, 2010 at 3:55 PM

    ohh dog!! i sometimes wonder if u take out da sex part!! who needs women!! :D

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  7. Arnab MajumdarJune 3, 2010 at 11:06 PM

    @ Brian... Thanks man. Been quite a while since I tried something like that, thought let's give it a shot - for old times' sake.

    Dunno who g-man is, and now I'm curious! :D

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  8. Arnab MajumdarJune 3, 2010 at 11:06 PM

    @ Brian... Thanks man. Been quite a while since I tried something like that, thought let's give it a shot - for old times' sake.

    Dunno who g-man is, and now I'm curious! :D

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  9. Arnab MajumdarJune 3, 2010 at 11:07 PM

    @ jarnebrand... Hehe, so true. Although, the sad bit is that I just found out that I can never keep dogs as pets myself... sad...

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  10. Arnab MajumdarJune 3, 2010 at 11:08 PM

    @ Ice Maiden... Thanks! And yes, I was considering that as an alternative ending, but then it would have exceeded the 55 word limit, so I left it out for you to figure out... hehehe! :P

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  11. Arnab MajumdarJune 3, 2010 at 11:09 PM

    @ buckingfastard... Hmm, interesting way of thinking there you have, my man :D hehe

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