160 - My Bitch

A jet black beauty
With soft brown eyes
I wanted to own her
Wanted to make her
My bitch
I stretched my fingers
And a cruel voice roared
“Watch it, man! She Bites!”

What can you say in 160 characters? (spaces included). I've seen this on Waystation's blog for a long time, but never before have I attempted anything of this sort. Until now.


Comments

  1. NitiMarch 16, 2010 at 3:55 AM

    I like it. I think less words say much more than a lot of words. It leaves space for people to fill in the details.

    Nice!

    PS: A little before 3 I suppose? :P

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  2. NitiMarch 16, 2010 at 3:55 AM

    I like it. I think less words say much more than a lot of words. It leaves space for people to fill in the details.

    Nice!

    PS: A little before 3 I suppose? :P

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  3. Brian MillerMarch 16, 2010 at 6:48 AM

    ruff ruff...nicely done 160...its pretty hard when you have to start counting so much...lol.

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  4. CaboMarch 16, 2010 at 7:17 AM

    I dig, bro. Ha. Nice.

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  5. järnebrandMarch 16, 2010 at 1:25 PM

    :) Watch out for the bitches... They do bite.
    Cute.
    /Jo.

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  6. järnebrandMarch 16, 2010 at 1:25 PM

    :) Watch out for the bitches... They do bite.
    Cute.
    /Jo.

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  7. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 16, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    @ Niti... They sure do! Thanks :) And yes, this was a little before 3 AM, although I was up and working on something else at that time :D hehe

    Cheers...

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  8. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 16, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    @ Niti... They sure do! Thanks :) And yes, this was a little before 3 AM, although I was up and working on something else at that time :D hehe

    Cheers...

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  9. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 16, 2010 at 3:55 PM

    @ Brian... Thanks man. It sure was hard, the tricky bit being in how to roll everything I wanted to say in those 160 characters. So far as the counting goes, I cheated a bit there... I had Word help me out with that :P hehe

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  10. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 16, 2010 at 3:56 PM

    @ Cabo... :D Thanks bro. How've you been? Haven't been around much lately...

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  11. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 16, 2010 at 3:57 PM

    @ Jo... Oh yeah, they do. And, when you least expect it too :P hehehe

    Cheers...

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  12. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 16, 2010 at 3:57 PM

    @ Jo... Oh yeah, they do. And, when you least expect it too :P hehehe

    Cheers...

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  13. bondgal_rulzMarch 16, 2010 at 10:03 PM

    Masttttt !!!!! I LIKE!!

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  14. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 16, 2010 at 11:48 PM

    @ bondgal_rulz... Hehe... thanks! :D

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  15. sakhii••March 18, 2010 at 4:15 PM

    fun...too much xpressed in less words...
    but honestly if i say i did not like it as much as ur othr post....gud nyways!!

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  16. sakhii••March 18, 2010 at 4:15 PM

    fun...too much xpressed in less words...
    but honestly if i say i did not like it as much as ur othr post....gud nyways!!

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  17. buckingfastardMarch 18, 2010 at 10:26 PM

    ahh wen a female titles a post my bitch...dere is sooo high expectations by us mortals...lolz

    she bites...yes she does!!

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  18. buckingfastardMarch 18, 2010 at 10:26 PM

    ahh wen a female titles a post my bitch...dere is sooo high expectations by us mortals...lolz

    she bites...yes she does!!

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  19. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 19, 2010 at 12:54 AM

    @ sakhii... It's something new I tried out. Why didn't you like it?

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  20. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 19, 2010 at 12:54 AM

    @ buckingfastard... Female? Who? Where??

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  21. sakhii••March 21, 2010 at 2:50 PM

    i liked d way u wrotw it....but obviusly coulnt connect wid it like ur othr ones...so!

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  22. Iddy AlbatrossMarch 22, 2010 at 2:50 AM

    @ sakhi... Hmm... to be very honest, it's not something I expected everyone to connect to anyways, so I guess it's fine :)

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  23. sakhii••March 28, 2010 at 3:04 PM

    i've posted some pics on my blog..watch them....mayb u can judge me on tht!!

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